You've Been Done Before

I been messing around with a song that's been stuck on my harddrive for a while now and I think it will fit Point zero, so I'm bringing it to the point zero rehearsal on wednesday to see what the guys think, and to see how it works out in a rockified state.

So.. the song is a bit odd, but I like that. It starts out in a pop/rock-Dave Matthews kind of style, with a simple three chord progression and a simple riff. Then in the middle of the song it visits a middle-eastern vibe and stays there for a while, then returning in joint forces for a last chorus.

Here's the current draft of my lyrics, might change as we rock on:

You've been done before

I try to make your world as mine
The world around has changed your sound
I try to change the course of time
Extract my flaws and extract my heart

It's hard to face it all, alone, astray and out of place
It will only bitter you..

Your sound is strange even in surround
Your soul is pale even in high def

It's hard to face it all, alone, astray and out of place
It will only bitter you..

It's alright
Cause it's all been done before
It's all the same and it's alright
Cause it's all been done before
You've been done before

(I don't think that the expression 'bitter you' is correct in english grammar, but I call on my artistic freedom for that :) ).